kia ora bloggers!!! in literacy were learning about instructional writing the teacher told us to write instructions on how to ride a bike I found this task difficult but enjoyable. have you ever ridden a bike?do you have a bike? Do you know how to ride it?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 6, 2021
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Hello Emmy! Its Honey here! I really enjoyed reading this. I have ridden on a bike and I do have one its blue my favourite colour. And I do know how to ride it. Your post reminded me of the times that I do the bike tracks in bottle lake forest. Have you ever done the tracks there? Anyway I was also wondering if you have a bike and is it your favourite colour? I love the post, but next time check your spelling before you post it. But like always Emmy its amazing and outstanding work. I really hope you decide to do a few more while we are out of school and at home.
ReplyDeleteBye and I hope you are well - Honey :)