Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
How can I be the best version of myself
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Emmy my name is Honey from Toroa! I love the pink leopard print background its awesome! I think its really cool that you have shared your point of view on the best version of yourself. Next time check the spelling I just saw a few mistakes, but that's ok it still looked incredible. I think I remember doing something like this is Korimako but I can't remember😅. I love the words you used in this slide. Amazing work Emmy! Oh and If you want to check out my blog then I think that would be awesome!
ReplyDeletehi Honey thank you for thank you for the increadible feed back you your coment made me feel so happy deep down inside. thank you😊
DeleteHello Emmy thanks for checking out my blog! It mean't a lot to me and I appreciate it. I'm really pleased that it made you happy! Have an amazing day Emmy and keep up the blog posts😉. I can't really comment on anything else so please put more on your blog. I wanna see more of your amazing work!
ReplyDelete- Honey